Embarrassing Moment Recount
WALT: recount a personal experience using correct sentence punctuation and sentences which make sense to the reader.
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> It was a long time ago. It was like a Tuesday morning when me and my friends just arrived at class. We went to sit down and we were going to do some reading. After reading we did some writing .
We were writing a narrative. Me and my friends started talking and we got in trouble when me and my friends finished. We went and showed our teacher it was a really long line it felt like years .
Until it was finally my turn she said next I moved up and showed her she was surprised about how much writing I've done because we were talking. Then she gave me a green tick and a sticker then she said next then I said ‘’Thanks mum’’.
Then I realised what I’ve said but thankfully she didn't hear it because of the noise. Hope it doesn't happen to you.
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